Here you can see an example of a high-level IELTS General Task 1 writing with an explanation of what makes it a good letter.
Task Question
You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Model Answer
Hi John [1],
I am so happy that you came to me with this. I know it’s a difficult decision, [2] but in my opinion, you should get a job and I’ll explain why [3].
I have known you since we were very young. We followed our school path together and I remember how you hated going to school. That’s why I think you would not enjoy college at all [4].
You have always been practical with all kinds of tools! [5] For example, I remember when you came to my place last year to fix the sink in my bathroom [6] and you did an amazing job. Perhaps you should look into following this kind of career path. It’ll be much more suitable for you than going to college [7].
You could even find a job in a construction company or you could become a handyman [8]. It’s true you will start as an apprentice and perhaps you won’t get a lot of money at the start but it’ll definitely be worth it [9].
Anyway, I hope that I have helped you to make a decision and I can’t wait to hear what you choose to do [10].
Goodbye pal. Hope to hear from you soon [11].
Your friend [12],
Josh
[Word Count: 201]
Explanation Notes
[1] Uses a casual opener suitable for this letter type
[2] Begins the letter naturally by showing an understanding of the situation and the friendship
[3] Shows the reason for the letter
[4] Completes point 2 by giving an appropriate and realistic reason
[5] Continues point 2
[6] Gives and appropriate and realistic explanation
[7] Reinforces and reminds the reader of the reason for the letter
[8] Completes point 3
[9] Considers own argument carefully and naturally
[10] Ends the letter by returning to the reason for the letter again and connects emotionally with the friend
[11] A casual final remark appropriate for the tone of the letter and relationship established
[12] An appropriately casual sign off
