Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Introduction
Paragraph 1 – Reasons why people agree that entertainers are paid too much
- Entertainers’ tend to work for only a few hours compared to other professions
- Some people think that entertainers are not skilled enough or do not have enough education to deserve such high salaries
Paragraph 2 – Reasons why people disagree that entertainers are paid too much
- Similar to art, salaries are based on demand. If people are willing to pay….
- Entertainers are useful to society because their talents can relieve stress, provide entertainment…
- They are constantly in the limelight so they have a responsibility to…
- Many entertainers’ careers are very short…
Paragraph 3 – Examples of other jobs which should be highly paid
- Teachers spend a long time on their feet and in front of students. They have a great deal of responsibility.
- Nurses and other carers are a valuable, yet hidden, part of society.
Conclusion
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